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hippesville
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17:37 Tue 18 Jun 13 (BST)  [Link]  
As we know in life things come to an end,
Last week funky lost a dear friend.
If you know him by perfect_play or his real name Blaze,
Just watching him play would leave you amazed.
Gone too early and it's too late to say goodbye,
I just have one question to ask, and that is "Why?"
I suppose the angels above needed a friend,
We miss you Blaze and all our love we send.
It now feels we have been left with nothing,
Rest In Peace Blaze, gone but not forgotten.

R.I.P Blaze mate!


Nearly as good as the man himself,
He was a master, a challenge and a mate,
Its just such a shame,
In life's complex little game,
That one should meet such a premature fate
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18:10 Tue 18 Jun 13 (BST)  [Link]  
Thought I'd have a go, apologies if it's naff:

Life has its ups and down,
At times it feels like a merry-go-round.
We watch life just pass us by
Nothing we can do but just try.
We aim for a happy solace
Only to be hit with lifes ignorant bliss

I never knew blaze as a player nor guy
From what i've heard it's hard to understand why?
Such an accolade, such words of love
For a person unknown who's now up above.
As we move on and never fret
Every time your friends log on, less they forget.

Edited at 18:23 Tue 18/06/13 (BST)
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18:51 Wed 19 Jun 13 (BST)  [Link]  
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23:17 Thu 20 Jun 13 (BST)  [Link]  
Dreading that it could be an awkward drive
Anticipating what could be the best of nights
Taking up all your thoughts
Expecting the unexpected.

Neglecting what you had previously planned
Increasing amount of excitement comes
Gambling on your final venue
Hoping she's just as you remember
Totally worth the wait.


My first non rhyming poem which I think sounds awful. Meh.

I've had a lovely evening though at least
justsumgirl
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13:17 Fri 21 Jun 13 (BST)  [Link]  
Sorry to say this on poem thread but im glad cheeky_chops deactivated......there was only ONE cheeky chops and that was Jill.



Some great poems before my eyes
An i must say to my surprise
Some new poets, we welcome you
For having a go and joining in too
I hope you keep up your posts
On the thread we love the most
Which has been thriving for years
Its brought us smiles an some tears
So carry on you lot having fun
Keep sharing the banter and he pun


lethal_lures
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17:39 Fri 21 Jun 13 (BST)  [Link]  
I was bored so here i go, first poem since school lolz!


My name is Lures and my name is Pete,
Loving the weather in this wonderous heat
Some days are good and some days are bad,
But nothing can change the great times i've had
I look to the future and what it may bring,
All i can ask is for that one special thing
What that may be is unique to you
For me its easy my love is that true
My name is Lures and my name is Pete,
Don't mock this poem i thought it was sweet
hippesville
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20:11 Fri 21 Jun 13 (BST)  [Link]  
you thought it was sweet,
well blow me down,
here's a response,
from the funkypool clown,
i like what you've written,
it all makes sense,
......that's if it was written,
by an eejit that was dense!!!

lmao i jest pete,
I'm glad ya stepped in,
the more the merrier,
and it makes paula sing,
so come back, don't be shy,
yer welcome always,
just type a rant or mushy one,
we look forward to yer future displays
punkpoet
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23:16 Fri 21 Jun 13 (BST)  [Link]  
This thread nearing to the end
every post a different trend
Some will make you laugh and cry
Some will make you sigh
Some like mine are very poor
Especially when it feels like a chore
But I only post to keep gazza happy
So I don't worry about them being crappy
But carry on until we have a new thread
I'm happy that this thread isnt dead
As I do like to read peoples rhymes
even if like mine there poetry crimes
hippesville
hippesville
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00:36 Sat 22 Jun 13 (BST)  [Link]  
This thread nearing to the end
every post a different trend
Some will make you laugh and cry
Some will make you sigh
Some like mine are very poor
Especially when it feels like a chore
But I only post to keep gazza happy
So I don't worry about them being crappy
But carry on until we have a new thread
I'm happy that this thread isnt dead
As I do like to read peoples rhymes
even if like mine there poetry crimes


a crime against poetry?
when was that my dear friend?
i'm questioning what it is above,
that just never seemed to end!! lol

.....but then there was a tourny,
9 mara and zac was scared,
i said he had to enter,
and see how well he fared,

his pessimism was disturbing,
20 points he said he'd lose
i didn't think...it'd be too long,
till our zac had hit the booze!

punkpoet ran the rack!
a smile grew on my face,
while i was gettin a lesson,
he was puttin 'em in their place!

punkpoet wins 11th 9 ball tourny,
points take him up to pro,
well done ya made me smile again,
and then listen.....to ya.......crow!
punkpoet
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00:42 Sat 22 Jun 13 (BST)  [Link]  
This thread nearing to the end
every post a different trend
Some will make you laugh and cry
Some will make you sigh
Some like mine are very poor
Especially when it feels like a chore
But I only post to keep gazza happy
So I don't worry about them being crappy
But carry on until we have a new thread
I'm happy that this thread isnt dead
As I do like to read peoples rhymes
even if like mine there poetry crimes


a crime against poetry?
when was that my dear friend?
i'm questioning what it is above,
that just never seemed to end!! lol

.....but then there was a tourny,
9 mara and zac was scared,
i said he had to enter,
and see how well he fared,

his pessimism was disturbing,
20 points he said he'd lose
i didn't think...it'd be too long,
till our zac had hit the booze!

punkpoet ran the rack!
a smile grew on my face,
while i was gettin a lesson,
he was puttin 'em in their place!

punkpoet wins 11th 9 ball tourny,
points take him up to pro,
well done ya made me smile again,
and then listen.....to ya.......crow!


haha like that one
justsumgirl
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02:09 Tue 2 Jul 13 (BST)  [Link]  
Ten days gone by since the last post
I thought we loved this thread the most??
There should be at least one posted per day
So from now on i expect it that way !!!!


hippesville
hippesville
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03:20 Tue 2 Jul 13 (BST)  [Link]  
Ten days gone by since the last post
I thought we loved this thread the most??
There should be at least one posted per day
So from now on i expect it that way !!!!




well don't just sit there and tell us what,
you think you can, you've lost the plot!!
show YOUR true colours and not neglect,
and if possible......a bit of respect!!

yer poem aint doin a thing dear for me,
a whinge and a moan...such a catastrophe!!!
come give us yer best shot, a funny one, if you dare,
a laughs all i want.......not a size 3.....covered in hair!!
justsumgirl
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03:30 Tue 2 Jul 13 (BST)  [Link]  
I can say whatever i like
If you dont like it...on ya bike
Im not neglecting im just busy
So stop getting yaself in a tizzy!
And leave my small feet outta this
Or my fat (_x_) you can kiss!!


hippesville
hippesville
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15:45 Tue 2 Jul 13 (BST)  [Link]  
Well HAAAAAALLLLOOO lil minx,
I'd fancy that,
I'd kiss it ALL,
What ya think of that,
And better still,
I wouldn't stop,
I'll leave it at that........to play in yer thoughts ;)
justsumgirl
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15:09 Thu 4 Jul 13 (BST)  [Link]  
Hippes!!


A bit of banter here and there
To and fro and all is fair
Here upon this Funky site
Posting and playing day and night
Keep em coming is what i say
Laugh and have fun come what may

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16:18 Thu 4 Jul 13 (BST)  [Link]  
Paula write a poem bar our Erik

Rizzy anyway?!

Ha!!!
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23:50 Sat 6 Jul 13 (BST)  [Link]  
I Woz Ere,
Ere I Woz,
Woz I Ere......
Yes I Woz!!!
justsumgirl
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01:02 Sun 7 Jul 13 (BST)  [Link]  
Paula write a poem bar our Erik

Rizzy anyway?!

Ha!!!



Lmao ill sort it soon hahaha
hippesville
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03:05 Sun 7 Jul 13 (BST)  [Link]  
I Woz Ere,
Ere I Woz,
Woz I Ere......
Yes I Woz!!!


lol
hippesville
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03:07 Sun 7 Jul 13 (BST)  [Link]  
Lmao she'll sort it soon,
I'll bet by that time, I could walk backwards to the moon,
but she'll come when she's ready,
in a big puff of smoke,
maybe I'll get a kiss!!!....and then always.....I'll croak
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