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06:12 Wed 15 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
Ste, i love it dont get mad lol but am gonna copy it, turn it round and change some words hehe

Plz now hun,dont feel neglected
I know it was something unexpected
but life is life and such is such
but i still luv u so very much
Hes not in the way most of the time
Plz dont let it play on ur mind
I feel 4 you, more than i do him
So no, ur not acting all dim
Not in too deep, plz dont leave
Ill help u with the heavy heave
Why do u think i dont care
Interest is still very much there
dont feel a fool,but u can go home
If ya feel u need to be alone
Ya sed u loved me 4 a short while
Saying that just makes me smile
My loves still here no extra cost
Maybe everythings no longer lost
So now dear love, dont make a sound
Cos when ur ready u can turn it around

Yay i done it ..hope ya dont mind me copying *hugs*
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09:24 Wed 15 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
Here is the poem, please dont ignore
Coz all of this is true, my mind assure
Paula and Ste have a speacial kind of love
Sweeter and kinder, than the softest of dove
It is so sweet, it makes me cry
And between them both, not a lie
They dontkeep secrets, that one another know
And all of this, i no it so...........
The sweet of sweets, is them both free
If one of them leaves, ill put up a huge plee
They are so good together, joint like tar
And there specail relationship,will surely go far
I care fo rthem both, my bestes of friends
And they will get through, all the straights and bends
Nothing will get between them, i no that 100%percent clear
And just seeing them together, breaks my tear
And you dont need to know this, u done need to be clever
Because all you need to know, is they have the best love ever!!
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09:46 Wed 15 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
Bravo guys, bravo !

Of course I dont mind you copying hun!

Nice poem famey!
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09:48 Wed 15 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
Its me Ste, rudders
M yother acc so wen i run outta posts i can go on thi sm8, HIII STE HANT SPOKE INM AGESS!
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09:52 Wed 15 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
A desolate mind, no matter inside,
This old tired man only likes to hide.
Away from the world, he cowers away,
And retires to the flat where he does stay.
Litter all over, his body a mess,
Slowly he runs his hands through that sacred dress.
Twenty- five years has now passed by,
He looks at the photograph which makes him cry.
So lonely and sadistic, so willful but sad,
So angry and upset, so empty and mad.
Dropping the dress, he drops to his knees,
'Evil god take me, take me too - please!'
Softly he weeps in the centre of the room,
Looks out of the window, with a face full of gloom.
Looking down to the floor, so far below,
He thinks of the life that he did bestow.
Margery died, when she was his wife,
Now this old lonely man, has ended his life.
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09:54 Wed 15 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
its me rudders Ste, im not a random dude lol!
Ste, can u update a poem on Rudders pleaseeeee
I done one on u lol!
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11:20 Wed 15 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
YES!! Ruds...thats FAB

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11:20 Thu 16 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
Common Ste
Do one on me
Ill be happy
and out of me nappy
so do one on me
My old friend Ste
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16:49 Thu 16 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
She was feelin kinda lost
Didnt know what to do
Only one thing for it
Try and see it thru
"I need to know how u feel"
It came out in a roar
Tell me whats on ur mind
Cant take this anymore
"Plz" she begged tellmenow
What it is u really think
A tear welled in her eye
As she gave a tiny blink
She looked at him an waited
Wondered what he'd say
She knew he felt so distant
How did it get this way
Lost for words he looked at her
Never spoke one word
In that very moment
She'd never felt so scared
He was gentle kind and caring
Was always there for her
She knows she slowly lost him
Oh god this isnt fair
Hed been staying out every night
Still she waits to see his face
Hoping for a sofa cuddle
As no-one can take his place
She had always loved him
It as simple as that
How is she going to cope
Without her beloved.............CAT!
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10:16 Fri 17 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
LMFAO! How did u set that up, good poem paula

Walking down the road
Dont no what to do
Switched to manual mode
And needed the loo
I feel so confused
Walking where i wish
I felt like ive been abused
Like a battered fish
Too late to go home now
As i have ran away
Me and my mum had a row
And that ruined my day
I wanna stay right here
And be an orphan child
Im about to cry a tear
And go out into the wild
Ill be like a wild cat
Brang up by a monkey
Ill prow the woods with a basebal bat
And be really funky
But this is my dream
Im now in my bed
My sudden light of beam
U believed what i said
I had you like a fool
Controlling you with my mind
Your like a cat with wool
You really must be blind
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10:16 Fri 17 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
Im now waking up
To this sunny morning
Im telling you to cup
This is your warning
Im writing it with a pen
Now you have to lie low
Before i get you again
So now you really have to go

That was my first eva poem layed out like that! lmao!
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16:09 Fri 17 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
Wooooooooooooo Ruds ...My one MAY not be about a cat tho!! Ya like it?
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18:49 Fri 17 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
Paula i sed yday that ures was amazing and it is! *hugs*

i loved em both!!
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00:12 Sat 18 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
Yes paula, u really have come out of ur shell at writing these things, there amazing! hun
Prob more better than myn to b honoust!
=) Go Paula! =)
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03:56 Sat 18 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
Nah Ruds....they take me days to do,,lol, thats why i only do them now and again..besides i can only do them thru reading how Ste and u put urs together hehe.....
My List of whos gud..
1) Ste (my fave..sorry lol)
2) Swing (his were great)
3) Ruds...
4) Squeezy

oooohhhhhhh and Stephyyyyyyyy's
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04:06 Sun 19 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
awwwww ty Paula hunni but mine are crap

Title for ya evryone: Lost
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10:33 Sun 19 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
No they aint *hugs*

Aww i cant do titled ones tho ......Ste and Ruds...come on..We are Lost here

Edited at 18:34 Sun 19/11/06 (GMT)
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06:27 Mon 20 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
Whos swing?????
And why is there ... after my name lol
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06:41 Mon 20 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  

In the middle of nowhere, dark as black
Stranded in the forest, with my dog mach
Only a cumpus, to keep me safe
Building my momentem, and keeping up faith
I went to bed, woke up right here
In the dark forest, my biggest fear
Keep hearing noices, so scary indeed
Mach gets scared, i put him on his lead
We start to wonder, not knowing whats ahead
Now my biggest dream, is to be lying on my bed
My bed is safe, unlike this dark and gloomy place
Keeping are cumpus, on are slow and scary pace
Thoughts wondering through my mind, when, how and why
I cant look after myself, i just want to die
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06:41 Mon 20 Nov 06 (GMT)  [Link]  
We keep on looking, in the distance theres a light
Going near it, just seems so right
We get to the light, dont know what it is
Next thing i know, Pop, Ging, Fizzz!
Im back lying on my bed, now i feel warm
Not cold and down, i feel on form
God knows what happened, i dont want to know
But thank god, i saw that glow
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