WOW, UR A NATURAL PAULA! MORE MORE MORE

this thread shall not die as we hav another good writer WOOO!!!!!!!!!

The time has come to end my life
So i walk in the kitchen to grab a knife
Hand to heart, i feel the beat
and forever more, take my last seat
I cant take it anymore, i can assure
And i cant get through it, like before
I have to sacrifice, its the only way
And that really is all i have to say
So more action and less words
Soon ill be in heaven, like the birds
No one in this life, loves me anymore
So through my body, i let out a roar
At full speed, it touches my chest
And very gruesome, it makes a mess
I scavage on the floor, like a injured fly
So this is my last chance, to say Goodbye
My eyes close, and body breaks down
And before i knew it, im flying through town
I must be a ghost, so happy indeed
Flying through town, look at my greed
So i fly past people and they ignore
This is much better than my life before

awww thats briliant rudders!! well done! *hugs*


pmsl at stellas snow white one..

Thnx

Great Ruds glad u liked mine btw hehe

OMG Paula yours was amazing!!!! and yours was good too rudders ....

Ste i forgot 2 say thankyou so much for my poem, cheered me up it did *hugs* xxxx

Yh very good,
Great Justsumgirl glad u liked mine btw hehe

LOL!

Oh pmsl dont start ya tart!

hahaha

Steph and Paula

These 2 ladies, have such despair
But to b completely honoust, i must b fair
So theres Steph so wonderful, Girly and funny
She reminds me of a calm day, so beautiful and sunny
Shes always here, just past a super fj i see
And 2 me, shes like the queen bee
She learning how to write poems at the mo
Im sure she will be very good, so........
Then theres paula, She has such a good mind
And 2 me, shes one-of-a-kind
Shes a superstar, shines funkypool all around
And to me, she seems so nice, and farely sound
Shes the best of the best, with over 10,000 posts
And shes not big headed, and she surely doesnt boast
So together they are great, legends i must say
And i would make my own site of them, if i had my own way
There both gonna stay with fp forever
And fp should agree, thats if there clever
So here it comes to an unwoven end
So who this isnt for, please dont affend

OMG! I LUV IT RUDS.......*hugs* Thankyoooooooooou One of the best youve done *cough* hehe

yay! Thnx! glad u liked it

*hugs*

OMG Ruds that was amazing Thankyouuuu!!!!!!!!!! it really is one of the best you've done! *hugs* xxxx

me and paula have never had a poem for the both of us before!!

Oh yh ur right Steph we havent have we?
Ok Ruds now doone...erm..JSG and Miss_Steph!

GIRLS POEM / PRAYER

Our Marks
Which art with Spencers
Hallowed be thy foodhall
Thy Gucci watch
Thy Kookai bag
In Hermes
As it is in Harrods
Give us each day our Visa Gold
And forgive us our overdraft
As we forgive those who stop our Next Card
And lead us not into Dorothy Perkins
And deliver us from Topshop
For thine is the Naff Naff, The Cartier and the Versace For Gaultier and Eternity.

AMEX

But wouldnt Miss_Steph & JSG be the same as steph and paula?

(hey all)

Great poems everyone - stella, the snow white one had me in stitches hahaha!!!!!

I thought it might lmfao evening skip

She moved to the left and off through the night,
The pleasure she gave me was true delight.
Smooth legs and that smile, that long flowing hair,
When I was walking past I stopped then I stared.
'How you doing big boy?' - is all that she said,
I thought that I was dreaming, it was all in my head.
But no all this was real, and we had a kiss,
We span up in the air and were both in so much bliss.
We made love there and then, in that very street,
It was so cold that one night, and the concrete hurt my feet.
Then when I take a picture, my friends said she was cute,
I turned around and said 'oh yeah? Well she's a prostitute!'

LMFAO nice one mate