Squeezy!,,lmao that was fab! they are all fab, but im waiting for Swings b4 i choose a winner...

When I was ten, my uncle woke me
"shhh" said Uncle "come and see"
So we walked, in that early morning light
He had a surprise waiting, and
I hoped it would be a tiger!
"Raaaaar" I went, and he,
stooping softly, told me that Auntie mustn't hear
for she "didn't approve" I was quiet,
because I wanted to see the tiger.
He led me to the low buildings,
the out-of-bounds behind the house.
"stay here" he said "and close your eyes".
I did as I was told, and soon,
the earth shook quietly, as
the tiger came roaring out of his home.
I opened my eyes, and stared, at
the monstrous beast before me.
So sleek, so graceful, yet filled with power.
It was still, but I could hear that terrible purr
waiting, promising that leap forward,
that smooth unbounded leap of energy.
"We'll take her out for a bit, me and you"
my Uncle yelled, above the roar.
but it wasn't a tiger, it was a Jaguar.

I had a bit of trouble with this one...not least the fact that when I'd finished writing, it was 1016 characters...then 1008 then 1001!!!! Damn this thing!

Awwwwww, nvm hun *hugs*

Cars poem:
And the winner is....*drumrolls*..........SQUEEZY!
well done!!.....and same goes for Mr G an Swing. (Looks like u 2 got comp here!...lol)

Title for next poem is..Candy Floss

Candy floss

There was a girl called chantelle,
When dressed up she always looked swell.
Her favourite colour to wear was always pink
And a peach schnapps, was all that she would drink.
One day she entered a big brother show
She was the only non-celeb, but she didnt know.
She was told this immediately, she was in a band
The name was Candy floss, the instructions at hand.
With a K it was spelt, which was meant to throw the scent,
She won the whole thing, maybe the rules were bent!
Now shes in love with Preston, an ordinary boy,
Now the tv guys want her, they want to employ.
They even talk about a band, yes! Kandy floss,
Lets hope they change their minds, surely it would be their loss.

Sorry the chantelle thing just popped into my head

Edited at 17:43 Mon 27/03/06 (BST)

Just in case that dont qualify, heres an alternative:

One day i was at a park, walking on the soft, moist moss.
On the horizon was a fun fair,i saw.
There were many rides and food, even candy floss,
The pink, sugar substance i had consumed many times before.

So soft and fluffy, as i quickly take a bite,
Sticking to the roof of my mouth.
But all of a sudden i felt my throat get tight,
And was finding it hard to cry out loud.

I looked up at the stall, where i had spent the cash,
And saw the man staring at me, a smile on his face.
He had dripped in some poison from his secret stash
As my throat shrunk even further, my heart started to race.

Now i am in the sky, forgiving every day
No blame as i am happy where i am.
I even forgive the crazed leader, that led him astray
To turn an innocent person, to a cold hearted, murdering man.

LMAO great! U cud become famous with that poem, send it ti BB bosses to read out on next show!!

Swing?? Squeezy?? come on guys, ur turn....

Lol!!! you never know!

2nd ones brill tho!!........

awww ta chic

I was gunna make the murderer an al qaeda servant, because of the speculation in the news the other day ( poisoning burgers etc), but ppl might of got mad, so he's an alias

Edited at 18:30 Mon 27/03/06 (BST)

Pink and fluffy and sticky and nice
Fun fairs and sweet shops at really low price
Big pink clouds of sugar and sweet
Candy floss is wot i'd like to eat.

Wanna keep this one short n sweet lol

Walking at the funfair, looking at a ride
Candy sees her dentist, and has to run and hide
He sees her running through the mud,
and swiftly starts to chase
But Candy's running is no good
and they soon come face to face.
"So, Candy", smoothly, Dentist says,
with a stern look in his eyes
"It seems you couldn't last the pace
this IS a nice surprise".
Candy tries a toothless smile,
teeth hid behind her lips
but she cannot match her dentist's guile
and he tears her off a strip.
"Now Candy, dear, it's time to brush,
you know I am the boss
Both up and down, without a rush
and then, dear Candy, floss."

HA HA HA,,,,i love them all, can this one be a draw???

a WHAT??

A draw! u know all winners!....

ok, ok winner of candy floss one goes to,,,,,,,,,,
(this is hard),,erm,,,,,,,,,,,ok....SWING wins,,,,,,,

next title is.......Chocolate.. Flakes, mmmmm

is this strictly a swing n mr_g thing or cud i give it a shot ?

anyone and everyone is welcome!!!

the subject was chocolate flakes
now i need a poem to make
so i sat and thought
whether i cud be taught
by mr g or swing
be taken under their wing
and directed how to write a poem
but ow much wud i owe em !

my 1st attempt

wahay! glad to seen u''ve taken an interest mr_cue

Paula these subjects are really random lol.

Rummaging through the cupboards, my back started to ache,
As i rigorously searched for the chocolate flakes.
It had been two days without, my addiction had grown strong,
Not a spacious break without, but for me it seemed long.
My aunt had hidden them, as she knew of my love,
But i sensed an inkling - they were on the shelf above.
Slowly i reached past the sauces, the salt and pepper,
I stood on the work surface, so i could reach a little better,
There they were! In all there glory so sweet!
Triumphant in my task i climbed back to my feet!!!
I ate until they had gone, the flavours soothing my mind,
Then i huddle back in my room, until the next day, the next time.




Edited at 23:25 Mon 27/03/06 (BST)

I'm gunna give this one a miss,
I'm lacking inspiration
Theres too much of what to think,
It causes persperation
As i sit and think i get stressed an hot,
I begin to think of choclate,
Mmmmm a cadburys flake!
Oh how it would melt. and crumble too
Melted chocolate is one of the luvliest things
Sicky stomachs messy hands and great big brown grins
If i could, i'd have them all the time
For snacks in ice cream...99's
Looks like its too late
For a poem i've done!
And despite not meaning to
It's been quite good fun ^_^